worked the part on non-free formats

Signed-off-by: Milan Santosi <milan.santosi@gmail.com>

kiss/freedom/notes.org

 * Selected Quotes
-"Flash is not actually secret but adobe keeps making new versions which
+"Flash is not actually secret but Adobe keeps making new versions which
 are different, faster than anyone can keep up and make free software
-to play those files, so it has almost the same effect as being secret.
+to play those files, so it has almost the same effect as being secret."
 
 Then there are the patented formats: it's BAD to distribute recordings
-in mp3 or any other proprietary format. Although there IS free software to
-handle those formats, distributors legally can not include support for
-such formats because they are patented in many countries.
+in mp3 or any other proprietary format. Although there IS free
+software to handle those formats, distributors legally can not include
+support for such formats because they are patented in many countries.
 Modern distributions of GNU/Linux such as Ubuntu facilitate use of
 these formats by letting the user decide, thereby avoiding legal
 issues. Whether or not this is a good thing is a question of moral. On
 the one hand, many of these formats have become pseudo-standards and
 for most users, the short term usability aspect prevails. On the other
 hand, it's a very bad idea if we were hoping to get rid of proprietary
-formats eventually. If you want to support freedom, don't distribute
-recordings in non-free formats. Please use formats such as .ogg,
-.webm, or .png."
+formats eventually. Anytime someone distributes anything in non-free
+formats, that's putting pressure on people not to use free software
+and free data formats. Sure, it is possible to add support for
+virtually anything to GNU/Linux systems. But there are a lot of people
+who, if confronted with an Operating System that does not provide such
+software "out of the box" (so it won't play, for instance, mp3 files),
+think it's the System fault. They don't realise it's mp3's fault.  But
+this is the fact. Therefore, if you want to support freedom, don't
+distribute data in non-free formats. Please use formats such as ogg,
+or webm.
 
 
 "In an epoche when governments work for the mega corporations instead